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Kju05 Some believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future lives. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own

created Jul 11th, 09:41 by Kju Si


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While proponents argue for the significance of childhood experiences, I contend that the most transformative stages of development occur during adolescence.
 
The assertion that early experiences wield considerate influence has a historical backdrop, with pioneers such as Jean Piaget delving into the intricacies of juvenile cognition in the early 20th century. Over the ensuing century, this line of research has solidified within the realm of psychology, affirming that formative experiences indelibly shape subsequent personality and identity. This effect is particularly pronounced when children confront adversities such as abuse or neglect, predisposing them to mental health disorders and enduring struggles with self-esteem.
 
Conversely, the contention that the crucible of impactful experiences is located in adolescence gains traction due to its more palpable and empirically traceable consequences. The aforementioned arguments, while theoretically compelling, encounter challenges in empirical validation. Teenagers grapple with decisions that exert a direct and discernible influence on their future life trajectory. The establishment of distinct social affiliations, the adoption of enduring hobbies, the selection of lifelong sporting pursuits, and even the initial steps toward a future career constitute choices that teenagers actively navigate. These decisions, intricately tied to their burgeoning identities, amalgamate into a mosaic of experiences that decisively influence their future lives, steering them towards divergent paths, such as selecting scientific or artistic pursuits in higher education.
 
In conclusion, notwithstanding the entrenched research elucidating the enduring impact of childhood experiences, the focal point of life-altering decisions manifests more acutely in late adolescence. Consequently, it is imperative that teenagers receive comprehensive support from both parental figures and educators as they navigate this pivotal juncture of their developmental journey.
 

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