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created May 7th, 15:46 by navidomidkhoda


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While both arguments present compelling debates, I lean toward Lila's perspective that grading may harm children. Not only does grading create children like a competitive creature that does not care about anything but grades, but it also contributes to preventing children from participating in extracurricular activities that may not bring them extra grades, such as playing on the playground and communicating with other children. It is highly acknowledged that students who only invest their energy in scientific materials, not social ones, are more at stake in facing real-life challenges. However, a non-grading system that provides students with personal feedback on different aspects, including educational as well as social, would be more beneficial for students. In conclusion, I wholeheartedly believe that the advantages of the grading system are eclipsed by the drawbacks
 
While both arguments present valid points, I wholeheartedly believe that the most significant benefit of museums is attracting tourists, as well as earning new financial resources to heighten the standard of living in of the city. It is important to note that museums are one of the most interesting places for tourists, enabling the host city to earn a wealth of earnings through museums directly and indirectly. Attracting more tourists to the city means a higher rate of job creation and income enhancement, leading to a prosperous economy and ultimately a higher standard of residence living. In addition, attracting tourists from various places ends up enriching the cultural aspects of the city and making it a vibrant and cosmopolitan city.
 
While both arguments present valid points on both sides, I lean toward Paul's perspective that cinemas will remain an important part of people's lives. Not only do cinemas heighten the pleasure associated with watching movies, but they also help us to deepen our relationships with friends and family members through shared experiences. It is important to note that with the advent of new technologies and gadgets, people have a greater tendency towards isolation than before. Therefore, the existence of such fun group activities should be treasured. Claire did make a point when emphasizing that many films are being produced as mini-series, but she failed to consider that there are many cinemas projecting mini-series, providing people with a fun time together. In conclusion, I wholeheartedly believe that cinemas have an indispensable role in our lives, and they are not going to vanish.

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